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Post by ~Liz~ on Jun 27, 2006 1:08:19 GMT
awww... i'm sorry hun. You'll have to deal with it.... give me some ideas!!!
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Jun 27, 2006 1:51:36 GMT
but....sigh.....ok I guess I can deal with it........I'll give you some ideas if i think of anything
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Post by ~Liz~ on Nov 15, 2008 2:15:09 GMT
haha, that's funny. i still have writer's block i guess!!! well, now i have it, and i'm going to print out the story and read it and write again!!!! yay!!
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Post by ~Liz~ on Nov 15, 2008 4:00:58 GMT
Chapter 11 Continued:
Holly took a deep breath. I knew this was gonna be something I didn't want to hear. "Well, you were right I wasn't ok earlier. Dave left me, well kinda left me. He walked out of the house, and he told me he wasn't coming back. I didn't know what to do. So I tried to stop him from leaving, but he wouldn't listen to anything I had to say." She paused for a moment, taking a deep breath. "So he walked out, and I called Brian, I didn't know what else to do. Where to turn. Brian didn't know, but he knows now, and well we've been talking..." She kinda trailed off with the talking part, and I had pang in my heart telling me something else happened too. "Just talking?" I asked. Holly didn't say a thing. I knew she wasn't going to tell me, but I knew I would get my answer one way or another. "Holly Marie Combs, what else are you not telling me," I asked again? Holly sighed. "And kissing... but I promise you that's all that happened." I looked into her eyes, and I couldn't be mad at her. Her eyes were red, and I knew that something more had happened that she wasn't going to tell me. At least not just yet. So I just stopped pushing. "I'll come back later... I love you Holly." I replied. "I love you, too, Liz." Holly said, smiling at me. I gave her a really big hug and held onto her for a few moments. I just looked at Brian, and gave him the look of don't you dare take advantage of her. And he knew what I meant. "Bye," I said to Hol. "Bye," Hol replied. I turned around and walked out the door. I ran home... I had to tell Bea what was going on, and I didn't know what else could possibly go wrong.
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Post by ~Liz~ on Aug 10, 2009 1:41:25 GMT
Chapter 12:
Once I got home, I went directly to the couch and shook Bea awake. I still couldn’t believe what I had witnessed. “Bea! Get up! I have loads to tell you,” I replied. “What?” Bea answered groggily. “I was just at Holly’s…” I replied. “What,” Bea asked a little more awake this time. “Brian was there. Something is going on, and she wont tell me anything. We need to go there later and give her the 411,” I answered. “I totally agree. So what all happened,” Bea asked. “Well, I went over there, and rang the doorbell. Holly answered the door in a frightened way, so I knew something was up. Then I found out Brian was there. And they talked and kissed, I guess. But there’s something else she wasn’t telling me,” I answered. “So we really need to dig into her then, and find out what the hell is going on,” Bea replied. I just nodded solemnly. “Its our best bet.” I looked at Bea, she looked at me. I sighed next, I didn’t know what to do. I wanted to know what was going on, but at the same time I didn’t’ want to know. But it was important to us both. “So when are we going back,” Bea asked? “I don’t know, I think we should wait until the morning. Holly also made it sound like Dave chose to leave her, since he found out about the baby being Brian’s and all,” I answered, shaking my head. “Poor Finley,” Bea replied. I just nodded my head. Poor kid, he was really gonna be confused before too long if Holly wasn’t careful. But we would figure it out. Holly, Bea, and I would figure out something. Even if it took us forever.
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Post by ReenO on Sept 18, 2009 5:49:49 GMT
wow you're still on it AWESOME...!
btw....it's still awesome....!! luving the storyline...!!
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Post by irena on Sept 20, 2009 8:55:24 GMT
I want more!
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