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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 10, 2005 16:57:10 GMT
how could you just stop....cliffhanger.....erg
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 10, 2005 18:13:44 GMT
So should I continue with Chapter 4 or start chapter 5?
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 10, 2005 19:43:59 GMT
I think you should start chp 5
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 11, 2005 1:48:48 GMT
Ok, will do.
Chapter 5: "Well... guys... I'm comin' back onto Charmed... not forever but for a couple eps to start with," Shan said. We both screamed and jumped up and down hugging. "Oh my gosh... that's so awesome," We screamed! "I know," Shan said, hugging us. "If any of the other news is anything like that... then plz go on," I said. Rose nodded, smiling. "So who's next?" "Hmmm? I'm holdin' off for a little while bofore I tell," Lys answered. "Ok then... Holly... tell them," Rose replied. Hol nodded, and looked at us. She took a deep breath... she had more then one thing, but would only tell one to start with. "Ok, well... Liz, Bea... I'm ur step-sister," Hol said. "What? How could you hold something that vitally important from us," Bea asked? "I don't know, wasn't ready to tell you," Hol answered. "Ok, but how," I asked?
To Be Continued...
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 11, 2005 2:06:27 GMT
wow.......really good
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 11, 2005 3:14:15 GMT
yeah i know
Chapter 5 continued... "Well, I guess that our mom, well ur mom, adopted me... so I became a half-sister, which is the same and step-sister... so I guess that's how," Hol answered. We smiled, this was so cool. We had a new sister, Shan was coming back on Charmed... Lys had some news. We were really excited now. "That is so cool," we said. We looked at Hol and ran over and hugged her. Then we hugged Shan. We hugged Lys and Rose too, just to be nice. Then hugged eachother. "So, what else?" Rose asked? "I don't have anything, I'm going to say... yet," Hol answered. "What Hol said," Lys replied. We looked at Hol and then Lys. What weren't they telling us. We shrugged and talked for sometime then that night.
To Be Continued...
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 11, 2005 6:06:12 GMT
stop saying to be continued.......i cant wait till ya continue it....
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 11, 2005 20:09:28 GMT
Yeah, I know that.
Chapter 5 continued... So we finally had to go home, and it was a little past 1 am... so we hit the hay. When we woke up the next morning, it was around noon. I yawned, then Bea yawned. We laughed and then remembered what had happened yesterday. We decided it was bes for us to stay home today which we did. Meanwhile at Holly's: "Dave! I can't believe you! How can you say that to me," Holly yelled! "Say what? That you're a complete and total crazy person... you slept with another man... not just any other man either... Brian. And now you're pregnant... with his child. I don't get why I don't have a right to tell you that... you're a very *friendly* person," Dave yelled! At this point Holly had begun to cry. She looked at Dave with tears in her eyes. Her eyes had pain and fear in them. Dave walked over to her. "How can you not forgive me? I made one little mistake... I got drunk... he took advantage of me. I should've been smarter, but I wasn't. And I'm so sorry," Hol yelled! Dave walked over to Holly and raised his hand to her face and slapped her. Hol screamed, and cried harder. She put her hand to her cheek and put her other hand up for protection. "Don't hit me," Holly said. She got up... or tried to and then she couldn't. She just from the ground attempted to hurt Dave... it didn't work. Dave looked at her... and then walked out the door, leavin' Hol there in pain. She just sat there, eventually, she crawled to the phone and called Shan. Shan got there immeadiately. She ran over to Holly. "Oh my gosh, honey... you're bleeding," Shan said, she pointed at Hol's mouth. Hol had fear on her face, her eyes. She couldn't move... she was so scared. She fainted in a few seconds. Finley wasn't home right now, he had been sent to Laurlies for the weekend. Hol laid there, still hurtin'. She woke up the next morning in the hospital. She looked around her, everything was blurry. She could hear voices, but she didn't know who they belonged to.
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 11, 2005 20:20:18 GMT
aww...thats sad....
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 11, 2005 21:11:58 GMT
I know... I already told you why. It'll probably get worse too.
Chapter 6:
"Holly.... you're awake," Dr. Homibin. Hol nodded. "Where am I?" Shan walked over to Holly. And stood by her bed. "You're in the hospital," Shan answered. "Why," Hol asked? "Because, Dave hit you. You fainted. I brought you here," Shan answered. "Oh," Hol replied. She just laid there, not sure what to think. Her sight was slowly coming back. She looked around and saw some stuff around her. She was on alot of IV's. And that was about it. She was still shooken up to. "I don't blame you for being scared," Shan said. "He came on pretty hard." "I know, but I'm still hazy about the whole thing," Hol said. "I know you are... but the doc said, everything will be fine. You'll be out in a few days," Shan replied. "Ok," Hol replied. She looked at Shan and then around the room. The doc was in there, and one other person, she couldn't figured out who it was though. "Shan, who else is in here," Hol asked? "Well, Dr. Homibin, and well... another person, who would surprise you that he's here," Shan answered. "Why? Who is it," Hol asked? "Well, here he comes now," Shan answered. Dave walked over to the bed. He smiled down and Hol. Hol looked shocked. "Surprised to see me," Dave asked? Hol nodded. "Yes.. why are you here?" "Well, Shan called me after you got here. When I heard the word hospital, I said I'm on my way. I can't believe I got that mad. And I put you in here. I'm so sorry, baby," Dave answered. Hol smiled. "I know you're sorry... I think anyway. But I don't see why you freaked so much." "I know, I can't believe I did either. It wasn't ur fault... well it was. But it was equally my fault. I shouldn't have let you go out alone. I should've called you and found out where you were," Dave replied. "Yeah, I know... but it's ok. I'm ok now... I might be pregnant, but at least it's not as bad as it could be. It could've been some guy I didn't even know," Hol said. "Yeah, then I would've really freaked out," Dave replied. Hol smiled, and Dave kissed her gentlely. Laurlie walked in with Finley. Dave had called her... she knew she had to get down there. So she got there. Holly looked at the door and smiled at her mom and her son.
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 11, 2005 21:37:45 GMT
aww man....ok that one wasnt as sad as the one earlier...the one earlier made me cry
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 14, 2005 22:35:02 GMT
I know it did.... i'm sorry hunni, you knew why though.
Chapter 7: Laurlie walked over to Hol, and set Finley on Hol's lap. "Are you ok," Laurlie asked? "I'm fine now, mom," Hol answered, she turned to Finley and smiled at him. "Hey sweetie."
DANGIT!!!!!! I have to go.... I'll have to finish this like 2moro... i'm really sorry hunni.
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Post by piperhollyrules on Sept 15, 2005 0:39:00 GMT
its really good
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Post by **Hol*Fan** on Sept 15, 2005 3:08:33 GMT
i know you do.....yea...i do...and its ok......ERG you didnt finish it...now I'm gonna cry again....j/k...well kinda.....anyway sweetie..the 3 lines you have up for chap 7 seem good
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Post by ~Liz~ on Sept 16, 2005 2:45:20 GMT
Chapter 7 continued...
Finley smiled up at his mommy, and grabbed for her hair. Hol took his hand, and he took her finger. She smiled and looked at him. He was so cute. "I've missed you." Finley just looked at her, and grabbed her ear. Laurlie laughed, and then smiled. "I think he missed you too, I know I did," Laurlie replied. "Yeah, I think so," Hol said.
Ok, I'm tired, I need to go to bed... sorry sweetie.
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